The Hawkline Monster 1

"The two little whores didn't know what was happening. They had never seen anything like this before and they had seen a lot of things. The brunette suddenly covered up her vagina because she was embarrassed" (18).

The language of this novel is very blunt; however, through these straight forward lines, there is a lot of description. The subject matter in this section of the story in particular is very awkward, but the author does not dance around the situation by using metaphors or flowery language. They boldly write exactly what happens without any embellishment. I really like this method as it is not hard to understand exactly what is happening, making it an easy and enjoyable read.